2.13 - Your Majesty

posted 26th Apr 2021, 5:00 PM

2.13 - Your Majesty
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24th Apr 2021, 2:36 PM

Llyrel

Aaaand... we finally find out what the name of werewolf girl is! :D
...Or do we? :O

Btw: yes, I'm changing the font of the comic. As much as I loved Anime Ace, it was just SO BIG I kept struggling to make it fit into my pages, especially these, since they're pretty dialogue heavy. So I'm switching to a slightly smaller/more condensed font for my own mental sanity :'D I went back and updated old pages as well. Since I can now fit a few more words into balloons, I also went back and edited a few panels in which I had to cut dialogue to make everything fit. Nothing major, just some tiny adjustments :D

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2nd May 2021, 2:26 AM

...(RockB)

Ohhh my! With this I could have said that I didn't say anything because I wanted to read the changes first - but the truth is I was too busy with work to pay close attention to CF and missed the page. Sorry!)

SHE is Tyresias!? Huh. Somehow I expected something different, a werewolf on a flea market or... idk.

And now I'm curious about the tiny adjustments... Until later, re-reading a comic... done. Can't tell where you changed something, maybe nothing in the first half, maybe something on the latest few pages... hmm.

After reading those pages again, I realized that Tyresias was really talking to "herself" before Adrian appeared.

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2nd May 2021, 12:45 PM

Llyrel

Aaaah, no worries! I also had some busy days at work which left me with little to no energy to do anything else at all, so I can totally understand!

And yusss, she is Tyresias :D and she did definitely had quite a bit of conversation with "herself" in Chapter 3, haha! More on that in the future ^__^

As for the changes... you're right, the first half was mostly unchanged, save for the placement of some balloons and a teeny-tiny edit to Adrian's dialogue on page 10, where "a quiet guy, for the most part" was changed with "a rather quiet guy". The last few pages do have a few more tiny changes... again, nothing big, but for example the smaller font made it possible for me to replace the "Gone... duh" Adrian says on page 36 with "Gone... obviously" as it was in the original script. The "duh" kinda bothered me because it felt a bit out of character for Adrian, but it was the best I could do with Anime Ace being so HUGE XD thankfully, switching to Ames Pro made it possible to fit more text in the balloon and make the dialogue sound as it was always supposed to :'D same for page 30, where Tyresias originally said that "small doses of aconite could be of great help" without specifying much, while now it's "could be of great help for those like me"... just tiny bits, but I felt bad having to leave them aside because of the font, lol :D

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