(It's interesting to see how much faster and more intense the information is delivered by the comic page - but not all of it, the description still adds some details, like, here, the pause.)
(Therefore, I want to suggest to put the description in a text box below the comic. Otherwise some readers may miss it. So far I have no idea about how difficult this would be but I hope it's easy.)
Haha, yes, the change of medium offers some interesting challenges! It was definitely the case with that pause: in the comic, it's quickly summarized with the "...", but for the written description, I felt a little more detail was needed :D
Alsoooo... you know that putting the description in a text box under the comic is a really good idea? :O I'll see if I fit them inside the "author comment" section to make them more easily accessible for everyone! Thanks for the suggestion! :D
28th Sep 2020, 1:49 AM
...(RockB)